Heart of Broken Glass

Wow, this is REALLY good. From what I see, your grammer and spelling are very good. But don't take that into too much consideration, I'm not that experienced yet. Any ...

Wow, that was amazing. It has me hungry for more! I think amazing how you have the connection between Chester and Sarah. It makes me wonder if there is going ...

Wow, okay I know this is short, but wow! This is really good and has me wanting more! You're really good at writing unlike myself. I'm still just an ameture ...

Well, I saw one spelling error but it's not major. I really like it. Post the next chapter soon!